Translating "The process may take several minutes." into Mexican Spanish

Question

I've generated the following translations for these two sentences, but they don't quite sound right to me. I'd like some feedback!

After the pink progress bar disappears, you must restart the device to complete the upgrade.

Translation:

Después de desaparecer la barra de progreso de color rosa, reinicie el dispositivo para completar la actualización.

The process may take several minutes.

Translation:

El proceso puede durar varios minutos.

I don't want the text to sound too robotic or formal. How would this sound in conversational Mexican Spanish?

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Phi · Accepted Answer · 2017-04-22 00:32:49Z

For this:

After the pink progress bar disappears, you must restart the device to complete the upgrade.

I'd say something like this:

Después de que la barra de progreso rosa desaparezca, debe reiniciar el dispositivo para completar la actualización

For this:

The process may take several minutes.

I'd say something like this:

El proceso puede tardar varios minutos.

For me, it's a little formal, and informal at the same time, yo can see the translation covering both sides.

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